"Boatsman pondered for a moment. Then he decided to let Carlton keep the hat
During the journey his old and ugly hat had become so comfortable and it suited just perfectly. And Carlton surely needed the other one more than him.
-By the way! Carlton said. I lost my sunglasses the other day. They´re my most precious belonging and I really need them up here in the clouds. How about joining me in the search for them?
-Why not! Boatsman said. I could need a little adventure for a change...
And so they took off in Carltons Panopticar. Two new friends in two hats.
Did they find the sunglasses? Well, that´s another story..."
So this is the end of the story. Thanks for watching and commenting! I´ve improvised the whole story so that´s why it´s a bit confusing sometimes. Some publishers are interested so now I need to analyze and work through the story and make it better. I think of this version as a rough sketch with bad translated english from swedish. And because of the publishers I need to remove some of the parts from DeviantArt.
I am so glad you have some publishers interested in your book!
Very best of luck with that.
You have only a few minor translation mistakes (like were instead of are) and I hope they don't make you change it too much. For instance I love "Ladde ladde up up!" and "But unfortunately, that´s too scary to illustrate".
I am sad that parts 1 and 6 and the cover are now gone. I hope that when I buy your book I will be able to get a copy of the originals and text as you presented them here.
I hope you make gobs and gobs of money and you are able to create more books. As I said before, this is one of the best illustrated and innocent stories for a childrens book I have ever seen!
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Each day we will feature 5 deviations from the Literature categories in a News Article. In order to support the artists that we feature, we ask that you the news article as well as check out the individual pieces. We understand that each day you may not be able to check out each and every one of the pieces, everyone has their own things going on. We just ask that you make an attempt to help support the growing Literature community.
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That was wonderful
I wish you can publish it !
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It would be great if you could publish it
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Very best of luck with that.
You have only a few minor translation mistakes (like were instead of are) and I hope they don't make you change it too much. For instance I love "Ladde ladde up up!" and "But unfortunately, that´s too scary to illustrate".
I am sad that parts 1 and 6 and the cover are now gone. I hope that when I buy your book I will be able to get a copy of the originals and text as you presented them here.
I hope you make gobs and gobs of money and you are able to create more books. As I said before, this is one of the best illustrated and innocent stories for a childrens book I have ever seen!
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Great story here!
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Make a PDF!
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